One event
that happened to me in real life is that during a volleyball match, we were
lost majorly. My team and I were doing good at practice and we thought we were
all prepared. We had our set up right, our passes were great, and we had a
great server. My team and I were on a great streak of getting our sets over and
our serves over, until we were in serve-receive. The other team who had a
really strong server, and a great blocker/tipper. All of a sudden we were doing
horrible. We were losing majorly because they had such strong serves, we
couldn’t return them. Also, when we went to block a ball, they tipped it right
back over. Then we couldn’t regain our confidence to come to come back.
Since their
serves and blockers were so strong, this effected our team, because it caused
us to become weak. We weren’t able to pass the ball back on serve-receive, or
even pop the ball up high enough to get a good set up, when there was a tip.
After not being able to return the ball back, time after time, we didn’t have enough
confidence in ourselves. This effected us majorly because when your team and
yourself doesn’t have enough confidence, it knocks you right down. Losing
during a game, caused us to lose the whole match.
If we
changed the way we looked at things, and wouldn’t have been so down on
ourselves, I know that we would have been able to win. Knowing what I know, we
could have shut them down, and one the whole entire match. When you give your
team good feedback on good things you did, you will be able to continue it, and
gain our confidence back. I know that we
would have definitely won, if we wouldn’t have been so ashamed in ourselves
because we could have got one good pass over, and we could have gotten the
chance to regain ourselves. I know that
good feedback, energy, and confidence, is definitely a key in winning a
volleyball match.
This is a really great piece! I like the concept of it, how skill isn't everything in winning, but you have to have confidence in yourself and your teammates. However, there are some spelling errors, and grammatical errors as well. In a few sentences you could fix the sentence fluency, and you seem to be repeating yourself a few times. But other than that, great piece! Keep up the good work!
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