Authors Note: This story is about a family owned pirate resturaunt and thier favorite meal is the spaghetti with meatballs. They one key ingerdient in every meal and they always put it to work to make evrything special. This is how a pirate resturaunt works.
Once upon a time there was a little pirate named Jacob. Jacob loved to help his dad cook. His dad is named Mike, after he cooked he always ran a marathon. This pirate family was quite interesting though. This wasn’t a real pirate family; they were cooks who owned a pirate ship which had a nice family restaurant on it. Once of Jacob’s favorite dishes was the spaghetti with meatballs. Every time they made this dish he loved to help put love and care into this because they didn’t want their dishes especially spaghetti have a bitter taste. Their key ingredient in every dish, which is a big secret to them is put love in every dish. To make their family owned pirate ship to eat on more realistic they dressed up like real pirates except they didn’t be mean. Jacob always wore a red bandana, leggings, a white blouse, a hook, a peg leg, pirate hat, fake beard, and long underwear of course. Now a day’s their dream came true to make this really happen in real life. So if you like the way this is headed you should come to San Francisco to try the spaghetti and meatball dish.
It is a cool idea to write about. But a have a few criticisms (sorry). Well, just be sure to capitalize your title (Pirate and Named should be capital too). And maybe you can try to make your sentences flow together, a little more.
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